Friday, October 19, 2007

Eternal Song












As the canorous birds sing
In the dim blue sky
I wake up with a sigh
Your name resounds
And you flash before my eyes
.



Recollections,memories
Your perfume lingers
A grasp on my fingers
Your voice i can still hear
As my mind rewinds



A love so pure
For i didn't want anything
Nor did I bind you with an oath
All i dreamed of,all i hoped for
Was to see you,
For time to pass while i'm with you.




Seized in an old tale
Of innocent youngsters
Shining eyes,gleaming smiles
Transcending this world
Into a sweet dreamland,
Pledge you won't wake me




But...
As you shook me
Woke me from my dream
Half-awake,half-asleep
Harsh truths i comprehend;
Sweet dream,come to an end





But nothing will take away
This song from my heart
I weaved it in silence
As in silence I loved.
Bitter sweet verses chanted
Chronicling from the day we met
To the day we parted








2 comments:

Dornen said...

hey moon-baby, congratulations for the blog, my brother just woke me up and it have been ages since i have checked my hotmail account, but it was a great surprise to see your blog first thing in the morning like that. :)

about your poems, i'm in no mood for analyzing yet, with that said, i can still say that i really enjoyed ~Eternal song~ and i just e-mailed it to a special friend of mine, because it just delivers how i feel toward her, thanks :D

as for the blog, it's nice to read your poems alongside your fragile and highly tasteful photo/paintings selections.

keep going girl, and have a nice day, love you & your poems so much. :)

Moon-baby said...

Hey Dornen!Thanks for by passing by and dropping a comment.I'm so glad you liked it cuz i always appreciate your opinion :)

Hope ur friend will like it though it has a bitter sentiment.

Miss u.

Have a nice day!!